Floating over brook and meadow
fallen timbers, overcome with reed
aroma dances with current and breeze
watchers on the bank lay quiet
contrasting sunlight diffuses in light mist
pools of calm cool air penetrate my skin
I am here, I am alive, I am aware
clarity booms deafeningly .. yet silent
travelled so far from antagonism
tranquility stands pacific
How grand the expedition
I am free
I am the pilot
7 comments:
Being the pilot is always good.
Have a terrific day Speedy. Big HUG. :)
Hi Sandee!
I keep changing and re-writing this post .. it seems close to something good, but just not quite right.
I like it, Speedy. Very nice. Really it is. You've got some really good images going for you there. :-)
Hi from Daisy.
I thought you nailed it...just sayin
"Iam free, I am the pilot", brilliant words. A man who's in charge of his life.
Soar on Speedy !
stop! It's PERFECT.
Favorite parts: the line about awareness ... reminds me of these moments where I look in the mirror and all of a sudden I am like ... crystal clear aware that I am HERE. I am ALIVE. This is REAL. This moment is mine.
And "I am the pilot".
Wow.
Beautiful. Really beautiful.
oh heck I loved the whole thing. antagonism. yet silent. clarity booms. deafening but it's really silence.
Dollar word: PACIFIC Not an unusual word but an unusual application. Very nice.
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